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Chapter 11 - BEFORE THE SCREAM

Planned length: 900 words

Helen reconstructs the minutes before Vanessa screamed.

Several relatives had been elsewhere in the house.

One cousin remembers seeing Vanessa step into the hallway.

Another remembers Richard carrying a folder.

The timing creates a narrow window.

Nothing proves Vanessa lied.

But Vanessa's account claims she and Richard had been alone considerably longer.

Cliffhanger: One relative remembers Vanessa asking a strange question minutes before the incident:

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