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Chapter 24 - “YOU BELIEVED HER BEFORE I FINISHED ONE SENTENCE”Daniel finally apologizes.

At Richard’s workshop/porch maybe.

“I’m sorry.”

Richard says:

“For punch?”

“For deciding before you spoke.”

Then exact line:

“The punch hurt for five minutes. What hurt was realizing you had already decided what kind of man I was before I finished one sentence.”

Daniel cries.

Richard admits paternal control:

“I spent too many years teaching you that your judgment needed my approval.”

Daniel:

“And I spent too many years proving I didn’t need you by doing opposite.”

Richard:

“Vanessa found that.”

No blame transfer.

Richard accepts apology maybe:

“I believe you’re sorry. Trust takes longer.”

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No hug immediately maybe later small gesture.

This is emotional payoff.

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