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Chapter 23 - RACHEL’S LETTER TO EMILYA year later, Rachel wrote Emily a letter through Dr. Markham.

First draft rejected.

Too much explanation.

Too much:

I was trying to help.

I felt excluded.

Your father undermined me.

Dr. Markham told Rachel:

“Emily does not need your defense.”

Second draft:

Emily, I treated your grief like disobedience.

I made you responsible for Lucas’s feelings.

I forced you into punishments that embarrassed and hurt you.

I recorded your reactions without showing what I did first.

I tried to make your father believe you needed to leave home.

That was wrong.

Emily read it.

Then:

“She didn’t say the patio.”

Dr. Markham asked:

“Do you need that?”

“Yes.”

Rachel rewrote.

I made you crawl on the patio when your knees hurt. I told Lucas to sit on your back. I laughed. I am ashamed of that.

Emily cried.

May you like

Not because she forgave.

Because reality was finally written correctly.

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